Shooting ideas for filming

 Having printed the lyrics, i came up with a shot by shot list that related to the lyrics and had some sybolic meaning.

 Alice then worked on linking my sketches to the connotations of previous photo shoots, and she linked the angles with some pragmatic meaning.

This is my shooting script showing framing for lyrics.

Final poster development

All i have done is changed Broken Dreams from white to black in the second one to see if it looked any better... took me about 2 hours over all on paint, but after all that i still prefer the first one!

Feedback Target audience

I have uploaded my latest poster designs to facebook to target as large an audience as possible.. i feel this is a good place to gather feedback as i can reach around 500+ people, mostly between 14 and 25 who are likely to be up to date with the music industry and the advertisments that support it.



Feedback offered for poster idea 3 ^




Feedback offered for poster idea 3 ^



All this feedback is fab! I think everything is more possitive about poster idea 3, so i will change the font and reduce the vignette...

Poster idea 4

Probably one of the most proffessional looking ideas i've attempted so far! i love this one and i cant wait to get feedback

Inspiration from a real meadia product for the colour scheme

Florence and the machines' music advert uses a similar tone of colours to what we had in mind. We wanted to experiment with the same style because we felt the black made the white font stand out, therefore using this idea we made our artist stand out as a contrast against the black surroundings. Also i think the tone of colours helps give off a particular mood and tone to which our music genre supports.

Poster idea 3

I have taken advice from our audience feedback and changed the contrast and tones within the image to make it alot darker and more emotional. This time the poster is more fitting with the album name.

Poster feedback

Poster 1

AUDIENCE FEED BACK

- The image is effective, the green colours look really nice

-Orbe. The orbe is the light on the right hand side and it could represent Ezgis spirit, which goes well with the well known album song 'forgetting Mary' 

-The photo looks too clean for the title 'broken dreams'; it needs to have an element of darkness to it.

 

Poster 2

 

AUDIENCE FEED BACK

-The darkness of Ezgi really gives the impression she is shadowing Dan

-The border makes the photo look tighter which frames 'broken dreams' in a darker way

- Dans costume really enhances him as a character and makes him the focal point within the image

-The broken dreams title slanted could be changed to straight to help with continuity amongst the other writting

Poster idea 2